Friday 30 July 2021

my Olympics


I slowly walk to the podium. I feel rapt and grateful because I got to be on an Olympics  team. It was Rugby Sevens. WE came 1st place and we got the gold medal. We were so proud of ourselves because we got the gold medal. I was very proud of myself. The crowd went wild. I was happy. My mum came up to me and gave me a big, big hug. Then my dad gave me a big, big hug. My mum and dad were so proud. I loved it.

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6 comments:

  1. Anonymous4 August 2021 at 09:24

    THAT WAS EXTAORDINARY WONDERFULL I LOVED how you explaned your actions

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  2. Anonymous4 August 2021 at 09:27

    thank you for that comment

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  3. Anonymous4 August 2021 at 09:32

    ywcm

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  4. Anonymous4 August 2021 at 10:03

    I like your Story Ta

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  5. Anonymous4 August 2021 at 10:24

    To Te Aorangi I like how you done the people but you could of made some of the faces a bit straight and then they will look a bit sad that they came like 3rd.And you could next time make the olympics rings a little bit wider
    and the ring the same size.

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  6. Anonymous27 August 2021 at 11:00

    good Comment thanks for that.

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